Passage 1
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Do you believe love is the most important? In the early twenty century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in that they received little love． At one time, Dr Skeels took twelve children from an orphanage or had a young girl look them each day． He also studied another twelve children who are left in the orphanage all day long． He followed these children not until they grew up, and the results were shocked． The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses． However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and independently． The only difference between the life of these children—the love, made a great difference to us．
答案：
Do you believe love is the most important? In the early century, homeless people were often brought up in orphanages, in they received little love． At one time, Dr Skeels took twelve children from an orphanage had a young girl look them each day． He also studied another twelve children who left in the orphanage all day long． He followed these children until they grew up, and the results were ． The children staying all day in the orphanage were either dead or suffering from serious illnesses． However, the twelve children loved by the girl were all healthy and ． The only difference between the of these children—the love, made a great difference to ．
1．twenty→twentieth 考查数词。表示二十世纪，不用基数词要用序数词，故将twenty改为twentieth。
2．that→which 考查定语从句。句中包含定语从句，修饰先行词orphanages，关系词在定语从句中作状语，表地点，故定语从句用“介词＋which”引导，相当于where，故将that改为which。
3．or→and 考查连词。此处指Dr Skeels从孤儿院领出了12个孩子，并且让一个年轻女孩照顾他们。前后句是并列关系，不是转折，故将or改为and。
4．look后加after 考查动词短语。此处表示照顾，是look after，故look后加after。
5．are→were 考查动词的时态。此处指被留在孤儿院的另外12个孩子，故事发生在过去，所以用一般过去时的被动语态，故将are改为were。
6．删除not 考查连词。until “直到……时”，not until “直到……才”，此处指他密切关注这些孩子直到他们长大，根据句意删除not。
7．shocked→shocking 考查形容词。此处表示结果是令人震惊的，用shocking。
8．independently→independent 考查形容词。此处作系动词were的表语，和and前的形容词healthy并列，也用形容词，故将independently改为independent。
9．life→lives 考查名词。此处指这些被调查的孩子的生活，用复数形式。故将life改为lives。
10．us→them 考查代词。此处指代these children，用they的宾格，故将us改为them。
