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Sunday 20 October
I was tidying my room yesterday and found an old photo in a notebook.As I was looking at it, the lovely memory of that day came back to me.
It was my mother's birthday ten years ago, and I decided to surprise her with homemade scrambled eggs.I woke up really early and tiptoed to the kitchen.I had never cooked anything before, so I tried to copy how she did it.But somehow they ended up burnt.
I was about to throw everything away when my mother came in.I showed her the eggs and sadly explained what happened.To my surprise, she tasted them and said they weren't bad! I guess love is indeed a magical ingredient.In fact, we ended up laughing and ate them all.
This weekend is her 45th birthday. I'll make her scrambled eggs again, and this time they won't be burnt！
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[学语言]
本文主要讲述了作者十年前为母亲制作生日礼物的回忆。文章主要以过去时态为主，讲述了给母亲悄悄制作礼物却失败的故事。为了给母亲惊喜，作者在文中使用了surprise，tiptoe等动词，使语言更加形象；失败后作者使用了sadly表达作者的失望之情。
最终，母亲品尝后说还不错。作者使用了 ... love is indeed a magical ingredient, 将爱比喻成“神奇的调料”，由此“爱”得到升华……
[学结构]
本文写作主要借助时间顺序：yesterday→ten years ago→this weekend。
文章内容：一张老照片(引起回忆)→十年前给母亲制作生日礼物失败→下周母亲45岁生日，将再次制作同样的生日礼物(新的愿望)。
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