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In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountainclimbing on April 10, in which hundreds of us took part (非限制性定语从句)．
It was a nice day.At 8∶00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain and set out for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery (现在分词短语作伴随状语)．When some fell behind, others would come and offer help.About two hours later, we all reached the top.Bathed in the sunshine (过去分词短语作状语), we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot.Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work (倒装句式), it also promoted the friendship among us.What a wonderful time！(感叹句)
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On 10th April, Xingguang High School hosted a mountainclimbing activity in Daqing Mountain.Early in the morning, the 200 volunteers from Xingguang High School gathered at the foot of the mountain, excited and energetic.
At about 8 o'clock, they started the long journey, heading_for the_top_of_the_mountain (朝山顶进发。使用现在分词短语作状语)．Those students, who seldom took part in this kind of activity, breathed the fresh mountain air, enjoying_the_beautiful_scenery along_the_journey (欣赏沿途美丽的景色。使用现在分词短语作状语)．Two hours later, they almost covered half of the distance and began to feel tired.Although the way in the mountain was tough and energyconsuming, none of the students had the thought of giving up.With strong determination, they spent another three hours struggling_to_the_destination (努力奔向终点。使用非谓语动词)．When they reached the top of the mountain at 1：00 pm, they felt relieved and proud for the efforts they had made along the way.
As far as I am concerned, this activity is very meaningful and inspiring.Not_only_did_the_students_build_up_their_bodies (学生们不仅仅锻炼了身体。使用倒装句式) but also it showed a universal truth, that is, success comes after constant efforts.I propose that our school should organize this kind of activity more frequently.
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